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lol. dont ask about the title..im not too worried about grammar or puncuation or whatever right now because im writing this and talking on the phone with my friend charlie. he likes to randomly sing ive noticed...lol. i just wanted to say, that chapter 2 will be done shortly. im almost done with it, so yeah. lol. just wanted to keep you updated. talk to you guys later. see-ya!

Chaper 1

Chapter 1

Okay, that was pretty dramatic. Even for me. But you know, my life’s all about the drama these days. But I couldn’t stop thinking about what Fang said to me. He actually did love me? Wow. That came as a shocker to me. Even though, he has kissed me and made out with me and comforted me and that sort of thing, but I never expected him to admit to my face how much he cared about me or even that he loved me. I mean come on, this is FANG we’re talking about. He’s not the type of person to just come out and say stuff like that. It’s unlike him in every aspect. But I have to admit, I do kinda like the new Fang. He seems so sensitive, yet tough and manly. Man, it’s enough to give a girl Goosebumps.
I woke up to a loud boom. Okay, it was more like, BA BOOM! It freaked me out. Or, at least, you could call it that. I jumped to my fight just as Fang jumped to his. We had slept right next to each other in case anything happened we could get to each other fast. Well, that’s the reason he gave me for me to sleep there. Who wants to bet he was lying. I put down maybe twenty or so dollars. Anyways, we had been sleeping in a run-down shack at the end of the shore, out of peoples vision and out of their way.
Fang slowly opened the door and peered around the edges. He suddenly stopped moving. “Fang, what’s out there? What made that noise?” He just stood there. “Fang? What is it? What’s wrong?” He just kept standing there. Now he was starting to freak me out even more. He turned to face me and said, “I have no idea. There’s nothing out there. Should we investigate to be on the safe side?” I just stood there looking dumbfounded. “Uhh, how can there be no one out there? We just heard that huge boom. Hang on, let me think for a sec.” I paced mildly around our lil’ shack, then turned and looked at Fang. “Yeah, let’s go, but we have to be super careful because we don’t know what we’re dealing with here. Kapish?” He nodded in agreement.
We stepped out of the shack, with, of course, Fang leading the way. We were both tense about the situation. I really didn’t want this to be another Flyboy attack. I mean, come on, this was my vacation. My romantic getaway with the guy I love. I mean, seriously. If this was an attack, I was going to be ticked like none other.
Then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw figures moving toward us. I couldn’t make out exactly what they were, but I knew that I wouldn’t be too happy when they got closer. Fang let go of my hand and then started running at them. I couldn’t believe this. Fang, of all people. was starting this fight when it could be avoided. Oh. My. GOSH! What a nice way to end the vacation might I add. But then, Fang went out of sight. I was all of a sudden alone on the beach with figures still moving toward me. What a nightmare. Should I fight or fly, I asked myself, well, Fang is still here. So, I should stay to help him out if he needs it. Where is he by the way? I hope he’s not in too much trouble.
That’s when it happened. The moment of truth. The figure that were heading toward me about to attack me and probably had captured Fang, were… OH. MY. GOSH.

NEW STORY!!!! Epilogue!

The Mysterious Adventures of Maximum Ride:
A Love Story Comes To Life.
Written by:
Brandi Jackson
Hey, people. I’m back again. If you’re reading this, you know what that means. I’m also still alive. Which, of course, I’m really happy about. Fang and I have gotten some time away from the flock recently. Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, and Angel are all with my mom and Ella. They told me they wanted a vacation where I didn’t have to worry all the time and I thought that them being with my own mother would be perfect. And it is. Fang came up with a plan for me and him to have a vacation of our own. Just me and him.
I’ll have to admit, I was pretty nervous about it after I agreed to it. Now, Fang and I and just chillaxin’ on some random beach. It really is nice though to be alone with him after our long separation. I missed him so much that you have no idea. *sigh* I still just can’t believe he talked my mom into letting me and him go off by ourselves for a couple of days. Isn’t he just the best?! Sorry, I had to say it. I probably don’t sound at all like myself right now. That’s because whenever Fang and I are alone, I feel like a completely different person. A better person to be exact.
When Fang is around other people, he’s secluded, and keeps to himself. But when he’s with me, he’s open and unafraid of anything and everything. That’s one of the reasons why I love him so much. Wait, did I just say that to my readers? OOPS! Forget what you just read! Seriously. If you don’t, I will hunt you down and make you wish you.. would have… forgotten it… heheh. I’m being serious here. Don’t you remember when I was all drugged up on Valium and I told him I loved him soooo much? Well, this would be even worse if he found out about it because I’m not drugged up on Valium right now.. Or am I? Just kidding. Or am I? Okay, sorry, I had to. It was just too dang easy.
“Max, wha you doin’?” Yeah, he slurred his words together. No, he’s not drunk like some of are are probably thinking. And no, we didn’t do anything! That’s for married couples! Man, you guys have dirty minds. Oh wait a second, I was the one who first said that, wasn’t I? Oh well, you guys were thinking it and that’s all that matters. “Just thinking. I thought you were asleep.” “I was, but then I woke up.” UH DUH, I thought. Man, when he just wakes up like that, he can be so stupid. But he’s my stupid.
“What are you thinking about? Does it have anything to do with the flock?” “Kinda. More along the lines of the here and now.” I gave him a knowing look. A look that practically said, “ I’ve been thinking about you and me. I’ve also been trying to figure out how to approach it. Got any suggestions?” And of course, since he’s practically my soul mate, he knew instantly what that look meant. “I’ve been thinking about it too. And I don’t know. I don’t want to just remain friends and what-not. I hate just being friends with you. And I can’t believe I just admitted that.” We both chuckled at that.
“Listen, Fang, I have to tell you something. I don’t know how to tell you, but I know I have to because I just can’t keep it to myself anymore. I seriously can’t. But before I can tell you, you have to do something.” He looked at me with confusion/amusement. “Okay. I’ll do anything for you. I can’t believe I just said that either.. Heheh.”
“Well, you have to prove to me how much you really care about me. You have to prove to me that you’re worth my time and effort. So that if something happens to show you’re not, I don’t get my heart broken as badly.” He just stared at me. I could tell he was thinking this through. Guys don’t usually know what to do when a girl says something like this. And, even though he was a super-enhanced form of a guy, he was no different from the rest of them.
He leaned in to me. He stopped right in front of my face, so that I had to lean in closer to hear him speak. “I would do anything for you, Max. You are the one I want to spend the rest of my life with. You are the one I want beside me. I know we’re only 14, but I care about you a lot and I never want anything to happen to you. If something bad happened to you, I don’t know what I’d do. When I came close to death, either times, you stuck right by my side. You never wanted to leave me. You even allowed them to check me into one of the worst places imaginable to us, a hospital. Even then, you allowed them to treat me and give my surgery. You gave me some of your own blood so that I could live. If the time ever comes where I have to do something like that for you, I wouldn’t hesitate a second. If it comes to the point where it’s either you doe or me, I’d pick me in a heart beat. Maximum Ride, I love you. I love you with all my heart and soul.” Just then he leaned in and kissed me. I didn’t know what to say or do, but I kissed him back anyways. “I love you too. More than you know.”

Hope you like it. I have more written. ill post in a sec though. one of my friends convinced me to start writing a story about the story Maximum Ride. So, here it is. Enjoy.

Life all around.

I've been recently reading this series of books called Maximum Ride. Even though I absolutly LOVE to read, I still wanted to check them out. I started to read the very first book and- BAM -I was attatched. I mean, I couldn't put it down. I almost got into trouble in a couple of my classes for reading during class and what-not. But I just never wanted to stop reading about Max and her love life with Fang, and their mischiefvous life that was constantly an all around adventure. From getting attacked by Erasers to have to take care of her flock. Life in Max's eyes looks do difficult. Especially, for a fourteen-year-old. I still don't see how she can put up with a talking dog, a six-year-old who can read peoples minds as well as control them, and can talk to fish; an eight-year-old who can mimick anyones voice; an eleven-year-old who can(actually i cant explain what she does really...)tap into, like, some kind of energy or something, i don't know; a fourteen-year-old who just happens to be blind, an aweomse cook, a tech geek, and be good at handling and creating bombs of assorted varieties; and also a fourteen-year-old who can't express his feelings at all to anyone, but her and is also a hard-butt, punch-you-in-the-face-if-you-took-one-wrong-move,butt-kicking guy.
I don't see how she can handle all them and fufill her destiny. To save the world. Yeah, pretty big destiny for a fourteen-year-old, i know. I can not stop reading it. I don't want to stop reading it. I love reading it. James Patterson is an excellent writer. I'm serious. I don't think I've ever read a book written by anyone better. Well, there were some really good books I've read, like by John Green and what-not, but he just knows how to write and doesn't hold back anything. And I like his style. lol. I'm sorry for those of you haven't read it yet and I just said parts of it, but once you read it, you'll discover that I haven't really ruined anything for you. Seriously, I haven't. I don't like to ruin books or movies for people because I know that if someone ruined it for me, I'd be ticked. To tell you the truth.
Max, in this book, has so much strength and courage, I'm amazed. For me, Maximum Ride is my idol. I really do wish that I could be like her or could've been like her when I was her age. I do know that I might be a little bit too old to have an idol, but I really don't care. I mean, Max is awesome in my opinion and I wish I was like her. Simple as that. I know she's fictoinal and all, but hey, I don't care about that either. To me she's real and thats all that matters. She's real in my head, so she's real to me. Oh, and sorry readers that I haven't been writing lately. I've been very busy. Well, I guess that I will sign off now and talk to you all hopefully soon.
Yours Truly and dedicatedly(if that's a word),
The-Darkness-Is-Real