Sunday, November 9, 2008

Chaper 1


Chapter 1

Okay, that was pretty dramatic. Even for me. But you know, my life’s all about the drama these days. But I couldn’t stop thinking about what Fang said to me. He actually did love me? Wow. That came as a shocker to me. Even though, he has kissed me and made out with me and comforted me and that sort of thing, but I never expected him to admit to my face how much he cared about me or even that he loved me. I mean come on, this is FANG we’re talking about. He’s not the type of person to just come out and say stuff like that. It’s unlike him in every aspect. But I have to admit, I do kinda like the new Fang. He seems so sensitive, yet tough and manly. Man, it’s enough to give a girl Goosebumps.
I woke up to a loud boom. Okay, it was more like, BA BOOM! It freaked me out. Or, at least, you could call it that. I jumped to my fight just as Fang jumped to his. We had slept right next to each other in case anything happened we could get to each other fast. Well, that’s the reason he gave me for me to sleep there. Who wants to bet he was lying. I put down maybe twenty or so dollars. Anyways, we had been sleeping in a run-down shack at the end of the shore, out of peoples vision and out of their way.
Fang slowly opened the door and peered around the edges. He suddenly stopped moving. “Fang, what’s out there? What made that noise?” He just stood there. “Fang? What is it? What’s wrong?” He just kept standing there. Now he was starting to freak me out even more. He turned to face me and said, “I have no idea. There’s nothing out there. Should we investigate to be on the safe side?” I just stood there looking dumbfounded. “Uhh, how can there be no one out there? We just heard that huge boom. Hang on, let me think for a sec.” I paced mildly around our lil’ shack, then turned and looked at Fang. “Yeah, let’s go, but we have to be super careful because we don’t know what we’re dealing with here. Kapish?” He nodded in agreement.
We stepped out of the shack, with, of course, Fang leading the way. We were both tense about the situation. I really didn’t want this to be another Flyboy attack. I mean, come on, this was my vacation. My romantic getaway with the guy I love. I mean, seriously. If this was an attack, I was going to be ticked like none other.
Then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw figures moving toward us. I couldn’t make out exactly what they were, but I knew that I wouldn’t be too happy when they got closer. Fang let go of my hand and then started running at them. I couldn’t believe this. Fang, of all people. was starting this fight when it could be avoided. Oh. My. GOSH! What a nice way to end the vacation might I add. But then, Fang went out of sight. I was all of a sudden alone on the beach with figures still moving toward me. What a nightmare. Should I fight or fly, I asked myself, well, Fang is still here. So, I should stay to help him out if he needs it. Where is he by the way? I hope he’s not in too much trouble.
That’s when it happened. The moment of truth. The figure that were heading toward me about to attack me and probably had captured Fang, were… OH. MY. GOSH.

2 comments:

Hailey said...

HAHAHAHAH I READ IT

Goosebumps isn't capitalized, y'know.

But you do Max's personality/voice very well.

Anonymous said...

i know...lol. i fixed it. along with other things
did yu read the prologue? lol what do you think of fangs character?