Chapter I (not named yet..sorry)

You see, my computer got a virus, so I lost the chapter of the last story I was working on..sorry about that..but I just started a new story. I'm hoping to keep going with this one. It depends on how many people like it, so if you like it and want to see more, drop me a comment and I'll keep writing if I can. Thank you for your patience.



Okay, I can do this, I thought as I walked down the long hallway towards his room.
He’s only a guy. It’s not going to kill you to talk to him. Just a friendly chat. That’s all.
We had just met up with this group from Colorado Springs. They were in need of some help and we were in need of some…well, help. You see, there’s this gang that has been hunting us for I don’t know how long. Maybe about three years or so.
They finally tripled in numbers, so they were definitely larger than we are. They had just recently launched a surprise attack on us, killing a few of our best fighters. So, you could say, we were in dire need of some help at this point.
I got to their door and froze.
What am I doing? We’re strangers. Why would they want to help us?
I was getting ready to turn around and go back to the den, when the door opened.
The very guy I was going to talk to stepped out and stared at me.
“Did you want to ask me something?” He said with a grin. Why was he smiling, and how did he know that?
“Um.. As a matter of fact, I was. We were wondering, the others and I, if your gang could possibly stay with us for a bit longer to help us out? You see,”
He help up his hand to stop me from continuing. “I know you lost a lot of people. And we’d be glad to stay and help. You helped us, so we would be honored to help you in return.”
I just stared at him not knowing what to say. Then finally I said, “Um, thank you. Your help is greatly appreciated.” That’s when I realized that the rest of his gang was standing behind him looking from him to me, seeing how our eyes were locked together.
It was like an imaginary force was keeping us from looking at anything, but each others eyes. It was really weird.
They were light blue, by the way. They were the shade of my favorite color. And when I looked into them, I saw mystery, bravery, strength, and warmth all hiding behind the confounds of his eyes. It was kind of cool, and strange all at once.
Then we both snapped back into reality pretty much at the same time. “Well, we are truly grateful for your cooperation and if there is anything that you need, feel free to ask me. And dinner is at six, by the way.”
With that I turned abruptly and walked away, with all five sets of eyes glued to my back.
I can’t believe I had the courage to do that. It’s not like they were thieves or anything, but I mean, he was handsome, and I’m….me. I mean, there’s nothing wrong being me, but sometimes it can be boring.
After you get used to all the fighting and butt-kicking, it can seem like a routine. Like your life is just one long routine going from day to day doing the same thing.
But now, that routine has been broken. Those people who died, my friends and family, are gone. I will never see them again, so therefore, my routine has been broken.
I’m just not sure if that’s a good thing or bad. I guess we’ll find out sooner or later. When the time is right for us to know. I just hope that time is soon.

YO!

lol. dont ask about the title..im not too worried about grammar or puncuation or whatever right now because im writing this and talking on the phone with my friend charlie. he likes to randomly sing ive noticed...lol. i just wanted to say, that chapter 2 will be done shortly. im almost done with it, so yeah. lol. just wanted to keep you updated. talk to you guys later. see-ya!

Chaper 1

Chapter 1

Okay, that was pretty dramatic. Even for me. But you know, my life’s all about the drama these days. But I couldn’t stop thinking about what Fang said to me. He actually did love me? Wow. That came as a shocker to me. Even though, he has kissed me and made out with me and comforted me and that sort of thing, but I never expected him to admit to my face how much he cared about me or even that he loved me. I mean come on, this is FANG we’re talking about. He’s not the type of person to just come out and say stuff like that. It’s unlike him in every aspect. But I have to admit, I do kinda like the new Fang. He seems so sensitive, yet tough and manly. Man, it’s enough to give a girl Goosebumps.
I woke up to a loud boom. Okay, it was more like, BA BOOM! It freaked me out. Or, at least, you could call it that. I jumped to my fight just as Fang jumped to his. We had slept right next to each other in case anything happened we could get to each other fast. Well, that’s the reason he gave me for me to sleep there. Who wants to bet he was lying. I put down maybe twenty or so dollars. Anyways, we had been sleeping in a run-down shack at the end of the shore, out of peoples vision and out of their way.
Fang slowly opened the door and peered around the edges. He suddenly stopped moving. “Fang, what’s out there? What made that noise?” He just stood there. “Fang? What is it? What’s wrong?” He just kept standing there. Now he was starting to freak me out even more. He turned to face me and said, “I have no idea. There’s nothing out there. Should we investigate to be on the safe side?” I just stood there looking dumbfounded. “Uhh, how can there be no one out there? We just heard that huge boom. Hang on, let me think for a sec.” I paced mildly around our lil’ shack, then turned and looked at Fang. “Yeah, let’s go, but we have to be super careful because we don’t know what we’re dealing with here. Kapish?” He nodded in agreement.
We stepped out of the shack, with, of course, Fang leading the way. We were both tense about the situation. I really didn’t want this to be another Flyboy attack. I mean, come on, this was my vacation. My romantic getaway with the guy I love. I mean, seriously. If this was an attack, I was going to be ticked like none other.
Then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw figures moving toward us. I couldn’t make out exactly what they were, but I knew that I wouldn’t be too happy when they got closer. Fang let go of my hand and then started running at them. I couldn’t believe this. Fang, of all people. was starting this fight when it could be avoided. Oh. My. GOSH! What a nice way to end the vacation might I add. But then, Fang went out of sight. I was all of a sudden alone on the beach with figures still moving toward me. What a nightmare. Should I fight or fly, I asked myself, well, Fang is still here. So, I should stay to help him out if he needs it. Where is he by the way? I hope he’s not in too much trouble.
That’s when it happened. The moment of truth. The figure that were heading toward me about to attack me and probably had captured Fang, were… OH. MY. GOSH.

NEW STORY!!!! Epilogue!

The Mysterious Adventures of Maximum Ride:
A Love Story Comes To Life.
Written by:
Brandi Jackson
Hey, people. I’m back again. If you’re reading this, you know what that means. I’m also still alive. Which, of course, I’m really happy about. Fang and I have gotten some time away from the flock recently. Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, and Angel are all with my mom and Ella. They told me they wanted a vacation where I didn’t have to worry all the time and I thought that them being with my own mother would be perfect. And it is. Fang came up with a plan for me and him to have a vacation of our own. Just me and him.
I’ll have to admit, I was pretty nervous about it after I agreed to it. Now, Fang and I and just chillaxin’ on some random beach. It really is nice though to be alone with him after our long separation. I missed him so much that you have no idea. *sigh* I still just can’t believe he talked my mom into letting me and him go off by ourselves for a couple of days. Isn’t he just the best?! Sorry, I had to say it. I probably don’t sound at all like myself right now. That’s because whenever Fang and I are alone, I feel like a completely different person. A better person to be exact.
When Fang is around other people, he’s secluded, and keeps to himself. But when he’s with me, he’s open and unafraid of anything and everything. That’s one of the reasons why I love him so much. Wait, did I just say that to my readers? OOPS! Forget what you just read! Seriously. If you don’t, I will hunt you down and make you wish you.. would have… forgotten it… heheh. I’m being serious here. Don’t you remember when I was all drugged up on Valium and I told him I loved him soooo much? Well, this would be even worse if he found out about it because I’m not drugged up on Valium right now.. Or am I? Just kidding. Or am I? Okay, sorry, I had to. It was just too dang easy.
“Max, wha you doin’?” Yeah, he slurred his words together. No, he’s not drunk like some of are are probably thinking. And no, we didn’t do anything! That’s for married couples! Man, you guys have dirty minds. Oh wait a second, I was the one who first said that, wasn’t I? Oh well, you guys were thinking it and that’s all that matters. “Just thinking. I thought you were asleep.” “I was, but then I woke up.” UH DUH, I thought. Man, when he just wakes up like that, he can be so stupid. But he’s my stupid.
“What are you thinking about? Does it have anything to do with the flock?” “Kinda. More along the lines of the here and now.” I gave him a knowing look. A look that practically said, “ I’ve been thinking about you and me. I’ve also been trying to figure out how to approach it. Got any suggestions?” And of course, since he’s practically my soul mate, he knew instantly what that look meant. “I’ve been thinking about it too. And I don’t know. I don’t want to just remain friends and what-not. I hate just being friends with you. And I can’t believe I just admitted that.” We both chuckled at that.
“Listen, Fang, I have to tell you something. I don’t know how to tell you, but I know I have to because I just can’t keep it to myself anymore. I seriously can’t. But before I can tell you, you have to do something.” He looked at me with confusion/amusement. “Okay. I’ll do anything for you. I can’t believe I just said that either.. Heheh.”
“Well, you have to prove to me how much you really care about me. You have to prove to me that you’re worth my time and effort. So that if something happens to show you’re not, I don’t get my heart broken as badly.” He just stared at me. I could tell he was thinking this through. Guys don’t usually know what to do when a girl says something like this. And, even though he was a super-enhanced form of a guy, he was no different from the rest of them.
He leaned in to me. He stopped right in front of my face, so that I had to lean in closer to hear him speak. “I would do anything for you, Max. You are the one I want to spend the rest of my life with. You are the one I want beside me. I know we’re only 14, but I care about you a lot and I never want anything to happen to you. If something bad happened to you, I don’t know what I’d do. When I came close to death, either times, you stuck right by my side. You never wanted to leave me. You even allowed them to check me into one of the worst places imaginable to us, a hospital. Even then, you allowed them to treat me and give my surgery. You gave me some of your own blood so that I could live. If the time ever comes where I have to do something like that for you, I wouldn’t hesitate a second. If it comes to the point where it’s either you doe or me, I’d pick me in a heart beat. Maximum Ride, I love you. I love you with all my heart and soul.” Just then he leaned in and kissed me. I didn’t know what to say or do, but I kissed him back anyways. “I love you too. More than you know.”

Hope you like it. I have more written. ill post in a sec though. one of my friends convinced me to start writing a story about the story Maximum Ride. So, here it is. Enjoy.

Life all around.

I've been recently reading this series of books called Maximum Ride. Even though I absolutly LOVE to read, I still wanted to check them out. I started to read the very first book and- BAM -I was attatched. I mean, I couldn't put it down. I almost got into trouble in a couple of my classes for reading during class and what-not. But I just never wanted to stop reading about Max and her love life with Fang, and their mischiefvous life that was constantly an all around adventure. From getting attacked by Erasers to have to take care of her flock. Life in Max's eyes looks do difficult. Especially, for a fourteen-year-old. I still don't see how she can put up with a talking dog, a six-year-old who can read peoples minds as well as control them, and can talk to fish; an eight-year-old who can mimick anyones voice; an eleven-year-old who can(actually i cant explain what she does really...)tap into, like, some kind of energy or something, i don't know; a fourteen-year-old who just happens to be blind, an aweomse cook, a tech geek, and be good at handling and creating bombs of assorted varieties; and also a fourteen-year-old who can't express his feelings at all to anyone, but her and is also a hard-butt, punch-you-in-the-face-if-you-took-one-wrong-move,butt-kicking guy.
I don't see how she can handle all them and fufill her destiny. To save the world. Yeah, pretty big destiny for a fourteen-year-old, i know. I can not stop reading it. I don't want to stop reading it. I love reading it. James Patterson is an excellent writer. I'm serious. I don't think I've ever read a book written by anyone better. Well, there were some really good books I've read, like by John Green and what-not, but he just knows how to write and doesn't hold back anything. And I like his style. lol. I'm sorry for those of you haven't read it yet and I just said parts of it, but once you read it, you'll discover that I haven't really ruined anything for you. Seriously, I haven't. I don't like to ruin books or movies for people because I know that if someone ruined it for me, I'd be ticked. To tell you the truth.
Max, in this book, has so much strength and courage, I'm amazed. For me, Maximum Ride is my idol. I really do wish that I could be like her or could've been like her when I was her age. I do know that I might be a little bit too old to have an idol, but I really don't care. I mean, Max is awesome in my opinion and I wish I was like her. Simple as that. I know she's fictoinal and all, but hey, I don't care about that either. To me she's real and thats all that matters. She's real in my head, so she's real to me. Oh, and sorry readers that I haven't been writing lately. I've been very busy. Well, I guess that I will sign off now and talk to you all hopefully soon.
Yours Truly and dedicatedly(if that's a word),
The-Darkness-Is-Real

The reason is...

The reason why I have this sidebar is because I was on my myspace account and saw an ad for this religion test I thought I'd check it out. Well, I took the test for the fun of it and according to the test, I should be a catholic. Even though I'm a Christian..okay then...lol. I thought it was funny. I also thought that it would be good to put it on here, for you guys to take it. Well, taake the test and tell me your results. It is kind of fun. Anyways, enjoy the rest of your weekend.

SCARY! NEVER DO THIS! PLEASE!

Hey guys. Sorry I haven't gotten around to adding more blogs. It's been pretty hectic around here lately. But today, I have advice I want to give. It's some pretty serious stuff and I don't want anyone getting hurt, like my best friend did. And I just happened to be there, so I witnessed it happen. Okay, well here goes...Do you know those cutters that farmers use to cut horses' hooves with? They're really sharp? Well, I would advise you that if you're ever around them, do NOT EVER let them get ANYWHERE close to your face. Trust me on this one. I just witnessed some major damage being done to my best friend about six hours ago and I really don't want anything like what I saw happening to those people reading this. If you want to know what happened, then comment me or something and I'll tell you. It really freaked me out. It took me about an hour and a half to stop shaking. No joke. You can even ask my neighbor, Becky. So, please, never get anything sharp close to your face. For your sake and mine as well. This really happened. My friend was in bad shape after it happened. It was the most scariest thing that has happened to me in....right around....3 years or so. I think it's around there somewhere. I never want to see him go through anything like that again. I was terrified out of my mind. I'm not trying to scare you to the point where you don't want to use scissors again or what-not, I'm just trying to show you the real dangers of the world now-a-days. Yes, I know there are far more dangerous things then what I've said, but things like this DO happen. Some people think that there is nothing to worry about. That they'll deal with it when the time comes, but we need to start taking precautions, so that we don't have to deal with it at all if we can help it. In the past few years, I've been a witness to several terrifying things. Today, just happened to be one of them. We never see things like this coming, that's why we shouldn't take so many things for granted. Like our lives. Such as: not wearing our seatbelts, running with sharp objects, getting our face alittle too close to sharp objects,etc...I know that after what happened today, I sure as heck won't take my friends for granted. If he would've been alittle bit taller, closer, or what-not to those cutters, he could have lost his life right in fron of me. He is one of my best friends and I don't know what I would do without his love and support in my life. I know that one day, we might move away from each other and loose contact somehow, but I know that we'll never forget each other and what we've meant to each other over the past two years or so. What I'll leave you with is this: If people keep taking risk after risk, then one of these times, there won't be anymore risks for them to take. Either they're dead, paralyzed, ect. I don't mean to shock people or upset people, I just wanted them to get a little taste of reality before they go and do something totally stupid. Like getting your face cut up for example. Well, anyways, good night and try not to get yourselves killed...lol. Just kidding...or am I?

ello

sorry guys, I've been pretty busy lately. i haven't even had time to write on my story. Which really sucks, but what can ya do? lol. I figured since I'm on, why not make a new post. Well, my brother is home. And so is his girlfriend and my nephew. I just love that lil' guy. His birthday is this coming Friday. He's turning two. I still can't believe how old he is already. He's just so adorable. Anyways, how has your guys' lives been going so far? Any complaints? Any praises? Well, I hope so. My life hasnm't been a big ol' buddle of joy lately, but when is it? You know what I mean? Oh well. What more can I do about it except try harder. I promise you guys I'll try to write some on my story, but right now I don't think I'll be able to finish that one. I'm thinking about starting over with a new story line. I just got some new ideas, so I'm pretty excited about it. Well, I'll let you guys get back to your busy lives...lol. See-ya guys next time. Hope you leave comments to let me know how its been. If I can help with anything, just let me know. I'm here for any of you. See-yas. :D

Why?

Why do bad things always happen to me? I'm serious. The only good things that have happened in my life are my family and friends. Of course, guys don't fall into that category right now. Seeings how I just got dumped last night. Sheesh..What's up with men now-a-days? They don't know a good thing until it bites them on the butt, then leaves them waiting in the dust. I'm serious. Have you ever noticed that? Guys drive me insane. Especially, ones that just turned thirteen, hint hint my ex just turned thirteen. And yes, I know that seems bad, but I thought he was a good guy and he was nice to me and everything. He made me believe that he liked me for who I was and not for the fact that I can drive real soon, the fact that I'm a woman, and the fact that in his head, if he asked me for something or asked me to do something, I'd most likely do it. He pretty much had me wrapped..ERGH! Guys just drive me insane...Isn't it ironic how the good guys, the ones that are basically the 'perfect man', turn out to be gay or already taken? It's like they're all gone and there's none left. Well, I know this one guy, well these two guys, who I really like, one more than the other. The funny thing is is that I'm actually in love with this guy. I've known him for two years in a few days. We've actually dated once, but it didn't reall work out too well. The good part is that we're still friends. Matter of fact, we're best friends. I just wish he realized how much I love him. Or even that I LIKE him. I don't even think he likes me back. And if he does, then he's doing a good job at hiding it. Well, the only thing I have to lean on is knowing that God will help me when I need it and he'll make things brighter for me in the future if that's what he has planned for me. I just hope that he can reach down his hand real soon and help me up because right now, I'm fallen. And I don't think I can get up on my own. Atleast, not anytime soon. Well, I'm going to go write more on my story. I'll post the first chapter when I'm done with it. I'll keep you posted.